Robot Excellent
Robot Excellent
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1960s Louis Marx Great Garloo Robot Wind Up Excellent Working! $41.00 |
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RARE 1950s-60s Metal Robot STYLE LAMP- Excellent Condition $199.99 |
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Vex Revell Vexplorer Robot Model Kit – Excellent Condition $51.00 |
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Vex Revell Vexplorer Robot Model Kit – Excellent Condition $76.00 |
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KO Yoshiya, Gear Robot, Tin Wind up toy- excellent condition & works $600.00 |
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The Iron Giant Power Hero Robot Action Figure with Motion Sensor, Excellent! $99.00 |
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WOWWEE LARGE ROBOSAPIEN Humanoid Robot & Remote Control EXCELLENT COND EUC $69.99 |
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Bandai Super Robot Chogokin GODREIDEEN excellent rare! $29.00 |
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ROCK’EM & SOCK’EM ROBOTS 2001 MATTEL EXCELLENT CONDITION Works Great! $13.00 |
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Vintage Japan TIN ROTATE O MATIC Battery Operated ROBOT ***EXCELLENT & WORKS*** $260.00 |
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70′S ROTATE-O-MATIC Super Astronaut ROBOT SJM Taiwan EXCELLENT Condition w/ BOX $68.00 |
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Bandai Super Robot Chogokin Great Mazinger excellent! $58.00 |
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RAD 2.0 Robot Remote CONTROLLED TOYMAX 1999 NEW & EXCELLENT CONDITION $250.00 |
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Vintage Ideal TOYS ROBERT THE ROBOT ***EXCELLENT & W/BOX & INSTRUCTIONS*** $240.00 |
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2001 Mattel Rock Em Sock Em Robots Excellent Clean Working Condition $16.99 |
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RAD 2.0 ROBOT REMOTE CONTROL TOYMAX 1999 SHOOTS SOUND EXCELLENT CONDITION CLEAN $249.99 |
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1959 MT Japan Tin R-35 ROBOT &Control Box Excellent &Working Perfect! Masudaya $349.00 |
Please help me correct the following description in grammar and fluence?
Dear All: I am trying to write a description in English for the robot I created. Please help me correct my description in English.
“” This robot is able to travel on X, Y, Z direction (X for 100 mm distance long; Y axis for 200 mm distance long, and Z for 100 distance long). This movement is fully supported by excellent rigidity and accuracy. This robot’s arm is able to spin at 8000 rpm speed. In addition, its brain is guarded and protected with eigth areas (two for top and buttom, two for left and right, two for rear and front). THis robot is armed by a machine gun which is capable of 11 bullets at one time. Once you press the buttom, the gun can be fully re-loaded in five seconds. ”
In English, Can I say “eight areas” ? I am trying to describe eight pieces of covering to protect a cubic object”
My robot is …. for 100 mm; Y axis for 200 mm, and Z axis for 100 mm). Each arm is… 8000 rpm. In addition, …. protected on eighth sides (two for the top and bottom, two for the left ….. It’s armed … which is capable of shooting … the button, ” I would study the errors and learn from them and then put it in your own words again for practice and add thoughts.. You can’t be armed by a machine gun or it armed you, he has with him. It wasn’t spell checked. You can paste it in here and spell check anything. You repeated the robot too much and could have used that space to give more information like my robot or my Plastic Robot, all I can thing of is my green plastic robot more interesting too, but it might imply you have a red one and a metal one etc. lol
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